This is a beginner project, and it shows.
Prepare your script in advance next time and you will have a much better finished product. I understand the rushed nature and all, but the quality really suffered from that aspect. The narration is a large part of such things, and should not be neglected.
Yeah, I had it written out but It wasn't really rehearsed. I had actually rewrote it and then replaced the audio track with the edited version, but I can't find it. But thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
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Utah
Joined on 10/2/11
Neanderthal man! 